Waddletea103's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[BIG BOY SUBMISSION]

very nice

[Shadow da Gucci Coochie]

im conflicted

[Outfits]

Very Very nice! Love the outfit, especially the shoes

[Yon walking animation]

The Quality of the drawing is good, but the motion is a bit janky. The legs motion is really good, but the skirt seems to be flapping back at random. However I do like how the skirt kicks up in the front. The body is also pretty good by itself, but with the direction its facing can get a bit confusing with the head staying at a perfect side profile at all times. The movement of the arms is kind of robotic. The arms just stop and immediately change directions. Id recommend a smoother ark for stopping. To do that, I usually just ease out the frames in a pattern where the frames condense together slowly, and then spread farther apart gradually (you get what I mean). I don't like the head either. You had the right idea to have the head bounce a bit, but it doesn't work because the neck doesn't move at all. All it ends up looking like is that she's just slowly nodding in agreement to something, instead of following the movement of the body. The hair has a bit of the same problem with the back of the skirt. Why would tilting her head up make her hair start to raise. Its blatant that the skull and the hair are on different layers, because the bangs don't move in tandem with the head nodding. Also, the sweep of hair on her bangs flick in a really jerky manor. Overall, there are some bad parts, BUT a lot of the limbs on their own are really good. You just need to make sure that all the pieces work to compliment each other, not work against them. With a little more polish, this could be a REALLY good animation.

[Rosalina]

Needs a bit of ironing out, but the big picture is good. Some polish could go a long way!

[Pizza Girl - Home]

Ahhhh, Quality.

[Creating the link]

yooo, imagine if ocarina of time was made on SNES. that'd be SICK

rouge2t7 responds:

It would be quite an interesting experience! I wonder how it'd work out.

[Sonic 3 Styled Pixel Art]

Traditional pixel art does NOT go with pixel renderings of 3d.
But, it is impressive what you managed to pull off

[knuckle sandvich]

"I dunno,this sandwich just lacks a certain, PUNCH"

[Rumia]

I like the red shading. It really puts emphasis her demon like status. This is really good, but you seem to put all the detail into the face. The dress looks flat and stiff, and the knees are quite unpolished.

bxni responds:

Thank you! And I definitely agree with what you said in regards to neglecting details from the neck down. I've been trying to improve in that aspect lately as I've been noticing that issue within my own art